I thought I would do a little something different today. I'd like to share a poem that my daughter wrote for her eighth-grade English class last week. The assignment was to write a poem using a given list of 14 words (timber, marmalade, cranberry, hoax, perspire, giveaway, ocean, horse, decibel, passion, anticipate, sensible, undercover, microscopic) on either Christmas, Hanukkah, winter, gifts, or snow. A challenge to be sure. Here is her poem:
Walking with Friends to a Bonfire
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Morning.
The frost is a dead
giveaway to the cold outside.
The hoax of winter:
the carpet of white looks
inviting, yet we pile on sensible
clothes to ward off
the chill. We walk with a
passion, anticipating our annual
tradition. A long
trek through an ocean of
white; this leads to a bonfire made
of fallen timbers.
Friends walk and talk,
collecting horse chestnuts that are
hiding, undercover,
in the snow. At last! The site
is reached! Decibel levels rise as the horse
chestnuts are roasted
over the logs. We perspire as the
flames, looking for all the world like orange
marmalade, dance around
the cranberry-red coals. When the
fire’s light begins to fade, we turn our toes toward
home. Microscopic lights twinkle
in the distance – how inviting they look! As
we return home, we are content and satisfied with our holiday tradition.
The frost is a dead
giveaway to the cold outside.
The hoax of winter:
the carpet of white looks
inviting, yet we pile on sensible
clothes to ward off
the chill. We walk with a
passion, anticipating our annual
tradition. A long
trek through an ocean of
white; this leads to a bonfire made
of fallen timbers.
Friends walk and talk,
collecting horse chestnuts that are
hiding, undercover,
in the snow. At last! The site
is reached! Decibel levels rise as the horse
chestnuts are roasted
over the logs. We perspire as the
flames, looking for all the world like orange
marmalade, dance around
the cranberry-red coals. When the
fire’s light begins to fade, we turn our toes toward
home. Microscopic lights twinkle
in the distance – how inviting they look! As
we return home, we are content and satisfied with our holiday tradition.
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I hope that you, too, are content and satisfied with your holiday traditions. Merry Christmas!
Peace and goodwill to all,
Emily
10 comments:
A beautiful poem. Well done by your daughter for sure! A wonderful Christmas to you all!
Bravo to your sweet girl Emily she did a awesome job! The merriest of Christmas wishes to you and your family ~ holiday hugs!!!
Wow! Emily that is so Beautiful! Merry Christmas!
What a great poem! Merry Christmas to you and your family!
Congrats to your daughter on a wonderful piece of writing. Huge Chrismtas hug to you! Enjoy the family time :)
Wow! What an outstanding poem! If I had read this without knowing who wrote it, I would have thought it was from a grown up. Like a real grown up grown-up. Tell J I LOVED it. It's really wonderful!
Merry Christmas to you all, Keaton family!
What a beautiful poem. I do hope you had a Merry Christmas my friend. Looking forward to seeing all your wonderful creations in the new Year.
Hugs~
She has done an amazing job! My favourite? "looking for all the world like orange marmalade". That just brings to mind such an image!
That teacher is probably crazy (or hoping lots of the kids gave up) ;) What a list!
Wonderful poem! Wishing you and yours many Blessings in the new year.
Your daughter's poem is so festive and fun. Well done! That was quite a list of words to work into it. It would look great in a frame as a present for family next year! A real keepsake.
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